After

Today I walked around Chicago area.
When I came here from California for the first time, I felt Chicago has nothing much because of cold weather in winter.
However, from the beginning of May, I felt it’s more beautiful with green trees and forests.
I was reading a book on the bench in the park. The fragrant grass and birds’ tweeting made me happy.

  • Try to begin a sentence with ‘however’ instead of ‘but’.
  • bench in the park 공원에 있는 벤치
Before

Today I walked around Chicago area.
When I came here from California for the first time, I felt Chicago is worthless.
But since the beginning of May, suddenly there was a forest, and I felt beautiful.
I was reading a book on the bench of the park, it makes me happy which is the fragrant grass smell and the tweed of the birds.

오늘은 시카고 근교를 돌아다녔다.   
처음에 캘리포니아에서 시카고로 왔을때 날씨가 추워서 그런지 볼것이 없었다.  
하지만 5월로 들어서서 갑자기 숲이 생기고 나니 시카고가 아름답게 느껴졌다.  
나는 공원벤치에 앉아서 책을 읽고 있었는데 향기로운 풀냄새와 새들의 지저귐이 나를 행복하게 만들었다.