After

These days, I'm in charge of marketing and web developing, but I'm not making any progress.
I felt depressed and useless, but my English teacher encouraged me that I'm great. Her kind words mean a lot to me.
I came back to my room and I started to think about what I really want to do for the rest of my life.
I kept thinking and decided that I still would want to develop software.
I'll keep trying to learn so I can have a better life.

Before

These days, I'm in charge of marketing and web developing but I'm not making any progress.
I felt depressed and useless but my English teacher encouraged me that you're great. Her kind words mean a lot to me.
I came back my room, and I started to think about what I really wanted to do. this one thing I can do for the rest of my life.
I thought and thought, and decided that I would want to develop software.
I'll keep trying to learn for a better life.

요즘 내가 하고 담당 하고 있는일은 마케팅을 겸해서 개발일을 조금씩 하고 있지만 진전이 없다.   
내 자신이 우울하고 쓸모없게 느껴졌지만 레슨선생님이 그렇지 않다고 격려해줘서 
힘이 많이 되었다.  
그리고 내방에 다시 돌아와 내가 정말 꾸준히 하고 싶은게 뭔지 생각해봤다.  
계속 생각해본 결과 역시 나는 개발일을 하고싶다고 생각했다.  
지금보다 나은 환경에서 살기위해 나는 계속 노력할것이다.